All these shadows are murderers,
arms up, begging for features,
sent back in time with a flash of light
and a convincing kind of sound
that left them stranded on a brick wall,
on the school's concrete facade, and
on the picket fence - no, inaccurate:
The fence is gone, too.
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Playing on my iTunes at this very moment:
Tame Impala, Edors Toi
Holy shit Paul. This is a good one. I feel like the opening line primes you to expect one kind of thing (it's very noir-sounding), but the poem abruptly turns into something else entirely, so abruptly that I hardly even noticed it. And I'm surprised the Tame Impala song you were listening to wasn't "Apocalypse Dreams."
ReplyDeleteWow, thanks man! The opener was the first thing I came up with and then it developed in a very interesting fashion from there, so that's a very fitting analysis.
DeleteAnd yeah, Apocalypse Dreams would have made more sense haha. It was next on the playlist, though.