"There's not much doubt in any of our minds that no complete idea springs fully formed from our brow,
needing only a handshake and a signature on the contract to send it off into the world to make twenty-five billion dollars.
The germ of the idea grows slowly..." - Walt Kelly

Monday, April 3, 2023

A malignant spirit's retreat, summer

Day three. Writing the "opposite" of a poem you like. That is, rewriting it using contrary language as often as possible. I chose an oldie I've had bookmarked for a long time - this poem by Jonathan Brechner, featured in decomP many moons ago. 
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It disregards cruelty to create life. I've sprinted each hallway,
the letters scattered on a full-color body,
bland disorientation rough in my nose. Space is still,

a ragged smell, bitter as a candy cane. 
Every bright spot is silent, each one a paper folding,
clasping its free-flowing message. The thoughts

ignore me if I scream, remain unspeaking, 
frozen still like raucous snakes. I remove each one
from upon my shirt and send it away. The knowledge he granted

is false, all of it failing, thin as pleasure, to stand
apart from these ceilings. Sometimes it drinks, dark clouds descending.
At 10:30 P.M. the walls will close, the purple women

will leave me, build up each flattened floorboard, 
steal vegetables from over my shoulder, their gazes lost among
the others so I may see. Even though I shy away, 

even though I whisper. 

Sunday, April 2, 2023

Seven questions

Day two. Today's prompt was to ask questions about a selection of words, ie: "What is ____?" Then, come up with abstract answers to those questions, and combine those answers in a poem My words were acorn, gutter, longing, generator, river, seaweed, and owl
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An emblem of possibility. 
Some ancient folklore's favored thoroughfare. 
The body we buried with all the others. 
Only a dream, a future left to rot. 
Pack mule of the sky. 
Unbloodied blades sinking through time. 
An emptiness below the stars. 

Saturday, April 1, 2023

A story of reading

National Poetry Writing Month is upon us again. And so, the dormant Writer Brian rises from its long rest, and takes the first step toward seeing if it's still any good at this sort of thing... 

Today's prompt is based on a book cover. The one I'm working from is here
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A length of tendon rebounds
like a loaded guitar string - 
feels like an "A." 
Something dramatic, 
poetic, 
worthy 
of medieval illumination.

Next comes the word,
and it fizzes 
under the nails
like an unqualified acquaintance 
has wired the socket -
hairs on end, 
voltage meter questionable. 

But we plough forward. 
Plow? No, not yet - 
edit later. 
For now, the opening salvo, 
and the covering fire, 
and the last, defining volley. 
Ride the lightning. 

Wednesday, May 18, 2022

Discussions

Gone is the need
for patience. 
Now, he can simply 
wear the suit 
and walk in screaming - 
that usually leads 
the whole room 
to a satisfying uproar, 
and then he can sit back 
and wait 
for the high walls 
of propriety 
to crumble like shattered glass. 
Job done.