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Thursday, April 28, 2011
When the new brass tiptoes
Interesting task, this one.
Prompt #28: Roundel
When the new brass tiptoes, the other soldier dies,
Too many times they've gone to deliver the rose,
A harrowing gift delivered with earnest lies,
When the new brass tiptoes.
Bullets ride the air between a man and his foes,
Despite his courage and to his great surprise,
Only the quiet ticking of his heartbeat slows.
Between the battlefield and home it's hope that fries,
Baked in the sudden sun above the final blows.
Alone the dead will rest in the bloodied night skies
When the new brass tiptoes.
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Playing on my iTunes at this very moment:
Brandon Boyd, All Ears Avow!
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I think you handled this challenge well. Bravo! Sad but well done. I appreciate the closing lines.
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Glad you think so, Jamie. Thanks so much for reading!
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