tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2489803666630928312.post3558226019450893928..comments2022-11-09T09:10:01.160-05:00Comments on The Germ of the Idea: Parade day rainPaul Mullinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08342387711052394010noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2489803666630928312.post-74767502257340222502010-09-18T11:51:18.919-04:002010-09-18T11:51:18.919-04:00I dunno about that...seems a little too abrupt to ...I dunno about that...seems a little too abrupt to me. But I appreciate the feedback all the same. <br /><br />That expression doesn't really apply here.Paul Mullinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08342387711052394010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2489803666630928312.post-25033649284648812312010-09-18T11:07:11.880-04:002010-09-18T11:07:11.880-04:00Interesting. I like the end minus the last couple...Interesting. I like the end minus the last couplet. I sort of like the idea of ending it with the simple idea of, "it's been called off."<br /><br />When in Rome though.Andrew Kaspereenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16541521775324833929noreply@blogger.com